中考英语写作点评指导范文记叙文
(二)记叙文及范文点评
记叙文记人叙事,初中英语记叙文与语文中的记叙文是相通的,耍弄清是写人、写事。初中学生的英语写作处于入门阶段,写人作文只是介绍性的,但要重点突出,用词力求准确贴切,多用简单句,适当使用复合句。
写人可以写的方面很多,如介绍姓名、年龄、职业、兴趣爱好、外貌、特长等,常见的句式如:
This is my friend, Mary.
She is ... years old.
She is a teacher/an artist/a singer...
She/He gets up at 6/5 ... /early/late.
She/He has sports at school.
She/He likes...
She/He is strong/fat/slim/kind/thin...
She/He looks like...
She/He is good at English/maths/Chinese/physics...
范文1
My Best Friend
My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study. We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very- good girl. We will be good friends forever.
点评:这是一篇记人的`叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁,接着通过事例交代了为什么“我们是最好的朋友”。最后阐述了主题。
范文2
My Class Teacher
My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years. He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I think he is a good class teacher.
点评:这篇文章取材都是身边熟悉的人,作者也有东西可写,更具有可读性。另外,写人时可以把主语稍作调整,读起来轻松多了。
I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is Cherry. Now I am studying in the middle school.1 want to be an actress because I think It is a funny and exciting job...
写事一定要交代时间、地点、人物、情节。常用的句型如:
It took place/happened…
Last/week/year/Monday/Tuesday...
One Friday morning..
范文3
Our Class Meeting
Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.
点评:这篇文章条理清楚,记叙完整,短短的五句话有简单句,也有复合句,交代了时间、地点、人物、原因、经过、结果等六要素。
范文4
Hot Springs Let Me Have A Rest
We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!”I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me... So I walked carefully into the spring. One step, two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.
点评:要写出生动有趣的事,除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚,还一定要注意增加文章的细节,这是必不可少的,丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少,使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。
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