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雅思剑八的写作解析技巧

对于剑桥的每一套书的诞生,写作老师最大的快乐莫过于来自研究考官所给的'满分作文!毕竟9分的雅思作文传递的就是考官在改卷评分过程中Care的!

雅思剑八的写作解析技巧

非常非常开心地发现,笔者在平时的教学中Care的Points考官的范文一次一次印证其准确性和实用性。

最后笔者总结了一些亘古不变的解题技巧!

从Task1讲起吧:剑八 162 页

这篇9分的小作文最大的技巧莫过于其语法句型。

Globally, 65% of degradation is caused by too much animal grazing and tree clearance, constituting 35% and 30% respectively.

这一句同剑七的第四篇小作文 Page 168考官范文如出一辙:

Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

还有 But by 2000 unclear power, which was not used at all in Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity...

这三句出自满分作文的句子都是 SVO,Ving....现在分词作伴状结构。

我们再看看剑八162页的另外一句话吧:

These causes affected different regions differently in the 1990s, with Europe having as much as 9.8% of degradation due to deforestation, while the impact of this on Oceania and North America was minimal, with only 1.7% and 0.2% of land affected respectively.

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