英文简历点评

Objective
A challenging Retail Management position in a fast-paced environment that will allow for personal growth and career advancement.

这句是写得不错的，当零售经理，你不怕挑战，变化莫测的`环境你也不怕，但是你渴望个人提成的机会，看来是块干大事的料，至少有这颗心。

Summary of Qualifications

Retail Manager with experience with a major department store chain. Skilled at planning and budgeting; employee training; adherence to company standards; build good customer relations.

你看多简洁，此人他本来就是经理，比较老练，但是她简练准确的英语你可以学学的。能planning和budgeting了，那她应该是middle management这个层次了。后面的adherence to company standards用得多好，我们的孩子可能很多用obey company rules是吧

Notable Achievements

*Redesigned Kleins floor layout, resulting in a more attractive store and a 300% increase in customer traffic.
*Averaged 17% year-to-year sales increase.

Experience

Kleins Department Store, Beaverton, OR
Store Manager, 2005 - Present 这里她不强调地址，强调职位
Increased sales volume by 150 % in less than three years. Designed more attractive merchandise presentation strategies and special marketing campaigns, resulting in increased store traffic and profits. Hired and trained sales staff. Increased store inventory and expanded merchandise purchases. Responsibilities included purchasing, merchandising, customer service, and all facets of running a department store.

Strands Department Store, Portland, OR
Mens Department Manager, 2003 - 2005她还是经理，多牛啊
Promoted from hourly position. Responsible for increased sales through use of aggressive city-wide marketing campaign and more attractive department layout. Daily operations included cash deposits and inventory control.

你看她是从计时工做起来的，中国话是说她从基层做起来的，多少不容易啊！人家看了立马感动！然后看，她做了city-wide marketing campaign，一个女的，能一大学毕业做全城的营销活动，多少不容易！整体语言流畅、简单、准确和专业，大家不妨学学！超级好的英语和表达。

Education

Portland State University, Portland, OR
B.A., Marketing, 2003 文科本科写BA，理科写为BSc，主流这么两种，其他再说
President, Society of Women in Business

她这么能干的人大学就提了这么一个事，不过对应届毕业生来说，这个不合适。要比她多。另外说明一点，中国大学生做英文简历，教育背景要往前面移，移到最前面，个人评价后面去，这是一个风格。另外一个风格是个人评价往后移，移到整个简历最后面，然后教育在前面。